Holy CRAP!
Your mic isn't pro, but its very clear, and your skills are great! Maybe its a unfair 10, but I'm a huge FMP fan, and you sound a LOT like Luci Christian, the English voice actor for Kaname Chidori! I'm sure you've heard that before, but wow. I mean, wow.
aw hey thanks for the comment! actually, i've never heard that before =) but thanks again haha
Good stuff!
Fantastic work here. Its not in the range of voice, but more in the miner nuances that give the characters CHARACTER. It doesn't feel forced or faked, and was quite funny at some parts.
You do need a new mic BADLY though. Its a shame to let a $10 peice of equitment hold back talent. The current mic you are using s dull and muddy, and stands out even more when mixed with crisp clear sound FX.
I recorded this in studio. My friend's the DJ there, so it's not a rockband microphone or anything like that, it's high end equipment. But, I do know what you mean. (I think the problem is my friend is a DJ and not a sound technician. [And, after seeing your own work, I'm that much more grateful for your input on my voice work. Please, let me know if you could use my help in the future])
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